建议信评讲.ppt

* 三段式十句作文法写作步骤： 1. 审题（题材，人称，时态） 2. 列提纲（题目中所需重点词语及句型） 3. 连词成句 4. 连句成篇 5. 规范誊写 假设你是李华,你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好,请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 内容提示： 1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 3. 课后认真独立完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习 5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 作文审题： 题材： 人称： 时态： 要点： 第一段： 第二段： 第三段： 第一人称和第二人称 一般现在时态和一般将来时态 从来信中了解到学英语遇到困难并寻求建议 1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 3. 课后认真独立完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习 5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 提出希望和祝愿 回信 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 整体三部分 Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题 I am sorry to learn from your last letter that you have trouble with … 2. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 3. I am very glad to give you some advice on … 4. I am writing to share some advice with you. 建议信第二段常用句式（给出建议，井然有序） 1. First … Second… Third … Finally 2. Firstly … Secondly … Thirdly … Finally 3. To begin with / To start with… Then… Next… Finally 递进关系： besides; what’s more; in addition 建议信开头常用句式? (照应材料,表明写作意图) 第一段：列举要点 英语学的不大好 You are not good at English. You don’t do well in English. You have difficulty with English. You have difficulty/ trouble in learning English. You are not getting along well with English 提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 I will give you some advice on how to learn English well. I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you. Here are my suggestions / tips on …. Here is some advice on 做好课前预习 课堂上认真听讲 记好笔记 prepare your lessons ahead of time before class. Listen (to the teacher) carefully in class Pay more attention to what the teacher says carefully make / take good notes 第二段要点 课后认真独立完成作业 每天进行英语听说练习 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 Finish your homework by yourself / on your own Practise listening and speaking every day Read more after class to enrich your vocabulary. 1. I believe you will take my advice seriously. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 2. I hope you will find my suggestions /advice practical / useful / helpful. 我希望这些建议/ 对你来说实用 / 有用 / 有帮助。 3. I am looking forward to your good news as soon as possible. 渴望尽早收到你的好消息。 4. Only in this way can you learn Engl