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考研精品班写作之讲义篇
写作:A.内容、观点:煽情(×)
Logic:不要跑题、不要违反原则问题
B.结构:三段、总分总(中心突出、层次鲜明)
中心突出:1.describe
2.explain
3.comment (from my perspective)
depict interpret
deduce the purpose
层次鲜明:To start with in addition equally important
For one thing… For another…
on the macro level on the micro level
C.语言:单词多变、句子灵活
D.格式:段与段之间不空行,每段开头空两格而非齐头式
句子不要改,单词应该改
E.错误:时态;主谓一致;简单单词拼写
图画类作文:
现象(问题)原因类
描述,原因、解决
道理;精神类
1.……的重要 2.原因 3.提倡
三正反对比类
1.positive 2.negative 3.how
表chart 柱状图bar chart/column 饼图pie chart 曲线图line chart
表格图table chart
上升 ascend (steeply) surge soar rise
下降 descend drastically plunge plummet drop shrink considerably
(shrink from…to…)
占据 take up make up account for constitute
大约 nearly roughly approximately 20% of the total / whole
(一、二合为一段)
一、引入话题
1.It is a striking fact that the issue of…has triggered a heated discussion.
2.Being a controversial issue,…has sparked a public concern those days.
二、现状
In contemporary China, especially in some metropolitans,…an enormous number(numerous/piles and piles of) of smokers can be seen ubiquitously. As the second pie chart illustrated, there are 5.8 billion people in the world, and the smokers are about 1.1billion,which accounts for roughly 20% of the whole.
三、危害
Undoubtedly, no one could fail to notice the undesirable consequences exerted by smoking. For one thing, smoking cost s a great deal of money. According to the third picture, smoking wastes 200 billion dollars annually. For another, around 3 billion people die from smoking-related diseases every year, as is revealed in the last drawing.
四、总结、预测
Therefore, smoking indeed does harm to our society. Nevertheless, we still can predict the picture tendency confidently that the amount of tobacco consumption is on the decrease. From the statistics given in the
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