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挑战自我
“直面恐惧”是挑战自找主题中比较常见的情节之一。故事中的主要人物通常面临巨大的困难。为成功战胜困难,克服恐惧,主要人物需要直面“心魔”,激发内心强大的力量。情节一般包含了“心理建设”“挑战过程”和“挑战成功”三个部分(在具体文章中会有省略或合并的情况)。
“直面恐惧”情节构造三部曲
步骤
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Step1:心理建设
类型1:自我激励
Shetriedherbesttoovercomeherfears,tellingherselfshecoulddoit.
SheimaginedthescenewhereMommahadtriedherbesttoovercomeherfearsandpluckupthecouragetodeliverafantasticspeechtotheaudience.
类型2:他人鼓励
Theirfirmgazebuiltupmyconfidenceandwekeptgoingtogether.
RealizingNeisha’sanxiety,MommareassuredherandreachedoutherhandtotietheblueribbonontoNiesha’swristwithasmile.
Theteacherstaredintomyeyesasifseeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.“Iwouldloveyoutogivethisatryforyourself.”
Step2:挑战过程
类型1:犹豫退缩
MyheartbeatwildlyasIcastscaredglancesdownthebridge.
Shenervouslyloweredherheadandavertedhergaze,feelingnumbforafewseconds.
类型2:重整旗鼓
Restoredanddetermined,Neishagrittedherteethtofindhercourage.Shestoodinfrontofamirrorandpracticed.
Hearingmyfather’swords,Irealizeditwastimetomakeachange.
Butcouragefounditswaybackthemomentshecaughtsightoftheblueribbononherwrist.
类型3:迎难而上
Fearsofheightsandmovingtoofastseemedunimportantnow.
“Youcandoit,”shetoldherselfwhendrowsinessfelluponher.
Step3:挑战成功
类型1:重拾勇气
Aself-reassuringsmilespreadacrossNiesha’sface.Sheknewforsurethatshehadnowfoundhercourage.
Sincethen,IhavelivedinaworldwhereIamabitbraver.
类型2:人生感悟
ItwasmyconfidencethatmademediscovermyownstrengthtoovercomethedifficultiesIhadencounteredoverthetoughjourney.
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Nieshacouldnotforgetthewayshehadfrozeninfrontoftheclasstoday.Mr.Robertshaddividedtheclassintogroupstodopresentations.TodayhadbeenNiesha’sturn.However,herhandshadshakensobadlythatshecouldn’treadhernotes.Hervoicehadbecomesoftertothepointofsilence.Mr.Ro