中考英语三轮冲刺复习课件-重点题型讲评 专项36.pptx

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中学生有许多烦恼，如学习的压力、交往的困惑、生活的单调、老师、家长的不解……你曾经遇到的烦恼是什么？你是如何解决的？你的体会是什么？假如你是李华，请你根据自身情况就此写一篇短文，向某中学生杂志的Discussion栏目投稿。要求：1.内容要全面、紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2.词数100字左右，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总数。审题：1.主题和内容：1）烦恼是什么？---Whatwasyourworryortrouble?2）如何解决的？---Howdidyousolveit?3)体会是什么？---Whatdoyoulearnfromit?2.人称和时态：你曾经的烦恼是什么？---第一人称(I,my,me…)一般过去时

整体构思明确主题，我曾经的烦恼是什么:e.g.pressurecausedbyschoolwork;relationswithfriends;worriesaboutexams…Para1:Para2:Para3:如何应对，合情合理，言之有物:e.g.

askparentsorteachersforhelp;writeletterstocertainexperts;communicatewithfriends…表达体会，摆脱烦恼后的体会如何:e.g.learnhowtoaskforhelp;theimportanceofcommunication…

例文赏析I’mLiHua,aGrade9student.Iusedtohavealotoftroublewithmyparents.Theywantedmetospendallmytimeonmylessons.Theydidn’tallowmetoplaycomputergamesorgooutwithmyfriends.Ofcourse,Icouldn’tstandsuchstrictrules!IwrotealettertomyparentsandtoldthemIknewitwasimportanttodowellinschoolworkandthatIwouldmakegooduseofmytimeandtrytodoagoodjobinmyschoolworkfirst.Afteralongtalkwithmyparents,theyagreedthatinmysparetimeIcoulddothingsIlike.NowIhaverealizedthatcommunicatingwithourparentsisagoodwaytosolveproblems.明确主题：讲述我的烦恼：和父母的矛盾。如何应对：写信给父母，保证先把学业搞好，并争取到合法权益：空余时间做自己喜欢的事情。表达体会：和父母沟通是解决烦恼的不二法宝。

语言赏析I’mLiHua,aGrade9student.Iusedtohavealotoftroublewithmyparents.Theywantedmetospendallmytimeonmylessons.Theydidn’tallowmetoplaycomputergamesorgooutwithmyfriends.Ofcourse,Icouldn’tstandsuchstrictrules!IwrotealettertomyparentsandtoldthemIknewitwasimportanttodowellinschoolworkandthatIwouldmakegooduseofmytimeandtrytodoagoodjobinmyschoolworkfirst.Afteralongtalkwithmyparents,theyagreedthatinmysparetimeIcoulddothings