20162017年南方新课堂·高考英语二轮复习测试专题五短文改错 含解析.docx

专题五 短文改错

训练1

A

Atpresent，IamextremehappybecauseIamdoingwhatIlike.Asaseniorthreestudent，Istudyhardeverydayandliveitatthe full.It feels like good to study hard with my determiningclassmatestofulfillourdreams.WhenIrecalledthehappythingshappenedtome，theexperienceofmyreceivingthescholarship inmiddleschooltoppeditall.Itwasatimewhenmyfamilyisgoingthrough financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win thescholarship，hoped to lighten my parents financial burden.Aftermakingtonsofpainstakingeffort，Isucceeded.Attheceremony，mymumwasthemostpoorly－dressedwoman，andwiththebrightestsmileonherface.

答案：

Atpresent，Iam

extremeextremely

happybecauseIamdoingwhatI

tolike.Asaseniorthreestudent，Istudyhardeverydayandliveit at

to

determinedthe full.It feels good to study hard with my determiningclassmatestofulfillourdreams.WhenIrecalledthehappythings

determined

happened to me，the experience of my receiving the

scholarshipinmiddleschooltopped

itthem

all.Itwasatimewhenmy

wasfamily is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my

was

hopingmindtowinthescholarship，hoped

hoping

tolightenmyparentsfinancial

effortsburden.Aftermakingtonsofpainstaking

efforts

effort，Isucceeded.Atthe

ceremony，mymumwasthemostpoorly－dressedwoman，

and

withthebrightestsmileonherface.

B

yet/but

OnSeptember29，thestudentsinourclasspaidvisittoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.At8：00，weleaveforChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseumbyschoolbus.At8：30，aguideintroducedthemtousbrieflyandtoldushowweshouldpayattentiontoduringourvisit.Tenminuteslater，weweredividedintofivegroupsbutbeganourseparatevisit.Somestudentstooknotescarefullyasiftheyvisited.Allthestudentswereamazingattherapidachievementsinscienceandtechnology.Threehourshadgonebyafterweknewit.At11：30，we returnedtoourschool