中考英语书面表达六步法.ppt
01五个“W”一个“H”03把答案写在题中相应的位置02认真读题然后找出第一步审题NMET2000书面表达假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。
1、目击者应该准确报告事实;
??2、词数100左右;
??3、结尾已为你写好。_________________________________________AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????LiHua附图1234At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000,Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.第二步抓要点一幅图,一要点时态直达语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点,配动词第三步扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词010302增加细节呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第四步连句成文01主谓一致吗?02时态正确吗?03时态正确吗?04有“半截话”吗?第五步查错改错卷面整洁不一定加分,01卷面潦草一定要扣分!02第六步誊写PARTONE作业选评PARTTWO精彩范文赏析精彩范文赏析At7:15a.m.onthemorningofFeb.8th,2000,IwasheadingeastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.精彩范文赏析Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreetmadeasuddenrightturnatthecrossing.精彩范文赏析Thecarwassofastthattheoldmanevendidn’thavetimetododgeandthecarhittheelderhard.精彩范文赏析Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidnt.⑥Instead,shejustdroveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllyingonthegroundinpain.主要特点记叙为主
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旁带说明背诵是个好方法基本句型的训练主语+谓语主语+系动词+表语(adj./n)主+谓+宾主+谓+双宾语主+谓+宾+宾补Therebe…二、对策适当使用过渡词为了使所写短文通顺、连贯,句子与句子之间过渡自然,适当加上一些表示并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的过渡词是很有必要的。常见的过渡词有:递进型:besides,whatsmore,letalone,tosaynothingof,whatwasworse,moreovereven等;解释型:thatis(tosay),inotherwords,or,inthesameway,等;转折型:however,but,yet,although,otherwise,instead等;列举型:firstly…secondly…finally,first,atfirst,atlast,next,举例型:forexample,suchas,thatis,like,等;因果型:because(of),since,as,therefore,so,asaresult,thanksto,thus,owingto,seeingthat等;让步型:though,although,inspiteof等;时序型:first…next…andthen…finally,atthesametime,meanwhile,f